Slide Makeover: Storyline, Headlines and Speaker Notes

Tier: Core · Hands-on time: ~30 minutes · Tools: ChatGPT, Claude, PowerPoint

Most decks you present, you didn't build from scratch — you inherited last quarter's, merged three people's sections, or got handed "the standard pack" the night before. A full rebuild isn't on the table. This recipe is triage: it fixes the order, the titles, and the clutter, in that priority, because that is the order in which audiences experience failure.

When to use — and when not to

• The inherited deckyou're presenting slides someone else made and the story isn't yours yet.
• The Franken-decksections merged from several authors, each with its own logic, tone, and title style.
• The night-before polishcontent is right, delivery isn't, and you have one hour, not one day.

And when not to:

• The content is wrong, not the packaging. If the analysis doesn't hold, no makeover helps — fix the substance first.
• The deck is fine and you're fiddling. If a dry run lands well, stop. Makeovers have diminishing returns and a deadline.
• You can't extract the text. The passes below work on slide text. A deck that is entirely images of charts needs the chart-level work first.

The recipe

1. 1.

   Extract the deck's skeleton (5 minutes). In PowerPoint, switch to Outline view and copy the text — or type a quick list yourself: slide number, title, main points per slide. This skeleton is what the AI works on; you never paste the whole file anywhere.

2. 2.

   Pass 1 — storyline order. Paste the skeleton with this prompt:

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   You are a presentation coach. Below is the outline of a deck I am
   presenting to [AUDIENCE] with this goal: [DECISION OR MESSAGE].
   
   Diagnose the storyline:
   1. State the story the current ORDER tells, in three sentences.
   2. Propose a reordering (list slide numbers in new order) that
      follows: situation → complication → resolution → ask. Say what
      moves and WHY in one line per move.
   3. Name slides that serve no step of the story — candidates to cut
      or move to appendix.
   Do not rewrite any content yet.
   
   OUTLINE: [PASTE]
   

   A good response looks like this:

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   Current story: background, then more background, then results mixed
   with methods, then the ask appears on slide 14 with no setup.
   
   Proposed order: 1, 4, 7, 8, [10+11 merged], 13, 14, appendix: 2,
   3, 5, 6, 9, 12
   - Slide 7 (churn spike) moves before 8 (root cause): complication
     must precede resolution.
   - Slides 2-3 (team, history) → appendix: no step needs them.
   

   Apply the reorder in PowerPoint's slide sorter before moving on — the later passes assume the new order.

3. 3.

   Pass 2 — assertion headlines. Same conversation:

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   Now rewrite each remaining slide's title as an assertion headline:
   a full sentence stating the slide's conclusion, max 12 words,
   include the key number where one exists. The headlines read in
   sequence must carry the entire argument on their own. Output as:
   slide number | old title | new headline.
   Flag any slide where you cannot assert anything — that slide has
   no message.
   

   Paste the new titles into the deck. Any "cannot assert" flag is a cut-or-merge decision for you, not the model.

4. 4.

   Pass 3 — one message per slide. For each cluttered slide, paste that slide's bullet text: "This slide's headline is [X]. Which of these bullets support it? Mark the rest as cut or move-to-appendix. Then compress the survivors to a maximum of four bullets, eight words each." Do this only for the worst offenders — usually a third of the deck — and make the cuts yourself in PowerPoint. You are the one who has to defend what stays.

5. 5.

   Generate speaker notes and rehearse (8 minutes). Paste the final outline: "Write speaker notes per slide: 60-90 words, conversational, first person. Open each with a bridge from the previous slide's headline. Never read the slide text aloud — the notes say what the slide does NOT show: context, story, the 'so what'. End the final slide's notes with the explicit ask." Paste into PowerPoint's notes pane, then do one timed run-through — notes you haven't spoken once are notes you'll read aloud on the day.

Make it yours

• Claude for the storyline pass: paste even a 40-slide outline in one go and get the reordering with reasoning; it is particularly good at spotting the buried complication. Keep all three passes in one conversation so later passes remember earlier decisions.
• ChatGPT with the file uploaded: upload the .pptx directly and it reads the deck itself — faster than extracting an outline, and you can ask "which slides are walls of text?" to target Pass 3. Rebuild still happens in PowerPoint by hand.
• PowerPoint Copilot for the mechanics: where you have it, use Copilot for in-place edits ("summarize this slide to 3 bullets", "add speaker notes") after the storyline and headline decisions were made in chat. Copilot executes slide-level fixes well; deck-level story judgment still comes from passes 1-2.

Quality check

• The flip test passesreading only headlines in order tells the whole argument.
• Situation → complication → resolution → askeach stage exists and appears in that order.
• No slide carries content its headline doesn't needcut or appendix, nothing "just in case" on stage.
• Speaker notes add, never repeatif a note sentence is on the slide, delete one of the two.
• You rehearsed once, timedthe makeover isn't done until the deck has been spoken.